...Meh...
...the biggest and oldest mistake in the book; You're frame speed was way too slow. I see you were probably trying to make it longer, but you should've made it at least 30. This is a bit stupid for that simple reason.
The other thing is, if you want to lengthen it out, make the movements of each thing much smaller like the ranin, instead of stationary lines, use moving lines moving space by space over and over again, but tightly wound together.